Poems

Compare and Contrast – Dempsey/TS Eliot

T. S. Eliot’s The Hollow Men and Sean Dempsey’s America, 2023 both confront the spiritual and moral decay of civilization, but they do so from opposite emotional poles. Eliot’s poem is elegiac: a whispered lament for a world hollowed out by inertia and disillusionment. His “stuffed men” drift without agency, trapped in the shadow between intention and action. Dempsey, by contrast, delivers a scathing jeremiad: his imagery is fiery, his tone apocalyptic. Where Eliot sees decay in paralysis, Dempsey sees it in frenzy; madness dressed as virtue, mobs devouring truth under the guise of justice.

Both poets grapple with a crisis of meaning, but Eliot’s world ends “not with a bang but a whimper,” while Dempsey’s teeters on the brink of self-immolation. Eliot’s metaphors are abstract. He describes shadows, dry grass, fading stars; Dempsey’s are visceral and brutal: blood-covered cups, bile, fire that “rapes the senses.” Eliot mourns a culture that has quietly died; Dempsey condemns one that gleefully burns itself alive.

Ultimately, Eliot invites introspection; Dempsey demands alarm. One captures the despair of postwar modernity, the other the rage of a post-truth age. Their shared brilliance lies in their refusal to look away from decline…only the temperature of their gaze differs.

tldr; Eliot’s poem is the ghostly whisper of a dying world; Dempsey’s is the scream of one that’s setting itself on fire.

The Hollow Men

by T. S. Eliot (1925)

I

We are the hollow men

We are the stuffed men

Leaning together

Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!

Our dried voices, when

We whisper together

Are quiet and meaningless

As wind in dry grass

Or rats’ feet over broken glass

In our dry cellar

Shape without form, shade without colour,

Paralysed force, gesture without motion;

Those who have crossed

With direct eyes, to death’s other Kingdom

Remember us — if at all — not as lost

Violent souls, but only

As the hollow men

The stuffed men.

II

Eyes I dare not meet in dreams

In death’s dream kingdom

These do not appear:

There, the eyes are

Sunlight on a broken column;

There is a tree swinging

And voices are

In the wind’s singing

More distant and more solemn

Than a fading star.

Let me be no nearer

In death’s dream kingdom

Let me also wear

Such deliberate disguises

Rat’s coat, crowskin, crossed staves

In a field

Behaving as the wind behaves

No nearer—

Not that final meeting

In the twilight kingdom.

III

This is the dead land

This is cactus land

Here the stone images

Are raised, here they receive

The supplication of a dead man’s hand

Under a twinkle of a fading star.

Is it like this

In death’s other kingdom

Waking alone

At the hour when we are

Trembling with tenderness

Lips that would kiss

Form prayers to broken stone.

IV

The eyes are not here

There are no eyes here

In this valley of dying stars

In this hollow valley

This broken jaw of our lost kingdoms.

V

Here we go round the prickly pear

Prickly pear, prickly pear,

Here we go round the prickly pear

At five o’clock in the morning.

Between the idea

And the reality

Between the motion

And the act

Falls the Shadow

For Thine is the Kingdom.

Between the conception

And the creation

Between the emotion

And the response

Falls the Shadow

Life is very long

Between the desire

And the spasms

Between the potency

And the existence

Between the essence

And the descent

Falls the Shadow

For Thine is the Kingdom.

For Thine is

Life is

For Thine is the

This is the way the world ends

This is the way the world ends

This is the way the world ends

Not with a bang but a whimper.

Sean Dempsey
Sean Dempsey moved to New Hampshire as one of the first 100 ‘Free Staters.’ He unabashedly believes in the US Constitution and the message and principles enshrined by its founders. Sean believes the country in which we live needs to re-examine what Jefferson, Washington, Franklin, and Adams believed (and were willing to die for). The message of freedom is not a tag line or something to be embarrassed by, but is sacrosanct and more important than ever!
http://dempseyestates.com

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